Aubrey collapsed

This is Aubrey Stone....i litterly JUST made up her last name now, lol. This is a scene in the story when she collapses on the road, its supposed to be heavily raining but this is just a prototype to get an idea of how it will all come together in the end.

I drew this peice because im trying to learn different poses and positions, as well as perespective and anatomy. So i am using Aubrey as a Guinea Pig while i am introducing her to you guys, lol.

So she's perfect for helping me learn how to perfect the body in different situations, poses, etc.etc.

Now remember my journal when i said that i have several Aubrey's in all different ages? Well i guess this one would be when she's 16....but i dont know how to fix the age thing in my story, so i am just posting these pics of Aubrey as practise and hopefully with feedback and advice i can conentraite on a good age for Aubrey. Whether she is 13 or 16 or 20....cause i have all of those, lol.

Basically i have drawn variations in age, but she is supposed to look the same in all linearts but ive drawn her young and old, so im not sure whats gonna happen, lol this is so confusing!

If you have any questions feel free to ask, i feel that if i talk about it enough i will figure something out.

Anyways stay tunes for more pics.

Oh and PS, i know how HORRID the hands are, so you dont have to point out how much i fail at hands and fingers, lol.